another gem, this is fantastic. its elegant, smooth and neatly woven together. i love the comparison to scratches "made in a moment of passion" - and once again the ending line is perfection.

Hey, nice poem. I love the line "we are like scratches made in a moment of passion." Great image there.

gorgeous work, i love the metaphors. the last line was especially lovely

hey! Congrats on ur wedding! I hope ya'll have a gr8 life 2gether! Neways LOVE the poem!! Coolios! It'S so damn true!

ooh...um...are u still against Christianity?

Urs, Biene.

Excellent contradictions, very good. I love the theme.

awesome. brilliant job with words yet again, keep it up!

powerful and beautiful similies

As always ur poetry is WONDERFUl. CONGRATULATIONS on ur wedding!! I am REALLY happy for you! I wish you all the best!! *sniff* How come I didn't get an invitation? *grins* neways...I like chocolate cake..hopefully that was what ur weding cake was *grin grin* jk. Congrats!

i liked how you ended this.."The imperfect perfection of humanity and beauty misunderstood"..lovely..do keep writing =D

Whoa, this was awesome. Fantastic, really...it was gorgeous, and so meaningful. I could see the images produced by these words. Keep it up! ~Writer of Darkness~