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| Moon-Chaser 2005-06-21 ch 1,   | Wow! The rhythm to this is beautiful and I can relate to this so well. I have felt like I was falling before and I love the decription in this. Keep it up. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-18 ch 1, | Nice rhythm to it, and strong with the repitition of "six feet under" |
| MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44 2005-06-16 ch 1, | This is beautiful. The last stanza rocks. keep writing |
| account not in use 2005-06-16 ch 1, | The last line seems a bit out of place, but adds something at the same time. I liked the way you worded it, very surreal, almost. |