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ki-riseup 2005-06-21 . chapter 1
This is by no means blasphemous.. I see it as a cry to the Lord, as we are all inclined to do sometimes. It is not wrong to lose faith, or to feel alone and helpless sometimes.

About the poem.. very well written. It conveys a lot of emotion, that I'm sure most readers have felt before, while in their darker moments.

I'm praying for you, that God will reveal himself to you again, and show you just how deep and wide and endless his love for you is! Keep crying out to him, he will listen. He loves you and is so proud of you! Keep on writing, you're great at it.
writerforever 2005-06-17 . chapter 1
You may feel as if God isn't there but just go to Him and He will hear your pleas. After all He promsed that He would.
OnFire4God 2005-06-16 . chapter 1
that was really well written. *nods* But God is there, and He does hear you, even if it doesn't seem that way.

God bless you,Lives4theLord
Adonia Chesser 2005-06-16 . chapter 1
Wow, a very well written poem.
Made in U.S.A. 2005-06-16 . chapter 1
God doesn't help because it doesn't exist. Life really is absurd because you cannot justify any one persons life except say that maybe their parents wanted them. So instead of begging a made up creation for help, help yourself. Keep writing.
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