Wow. This is...amazing. So very powerful...you have earned your way to my favorites list. This is awesome.

Great poem.

First line made me think of 'the ha ha wall' by the libertines - although that's 'if you get tired', but that's irrelevent. The second line seems melodramatic and teeny-ish. I don't like it. Just the line, that is. Some of the lines were unbalanced so in parts it read oddly. 'For the innocence I’ve lost' was another cliche lin in my opinion.

But following this, I liked the lines: 'That there will never be/Another today/So why make today/A bad one.' I like it. It's relieved but almost ominous at the same time. Brings back images of being sad (or such) somewhere but the last day is when you almost never want to leave. Last line works well.