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| Asia Ralaia Schiegoh 2007-02-26 ch 1,  | abuse"Expect to feed him from my Captive stores of pomegranates Once gleaming in the sunshine, Flaunting quivering inside juices" Those're my favorite lines! This reminds me kinda-sorta of Demeter... but not really. Only with the Summer wheatfield part. Well written! ~ARS |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseAnother great poem. This one, again, is very touching and powerful. |