i absolutely loved the visualization in this! everything was so detailed and so carefully placed, it is just so fucking pretty. i just loved it. *faves*

wonderfully written

Oh, do I ever -love- this. I've never quite figured out how to put this image into words, but you did a great job.

I liked this one. Beautiful, flowing imagery with a sort of bite to it.

I really liked it, beautiful

beauitful delicous imagry, wonderful descriptions. sort of twisted, but captivating at the same time.

I love the message in here. Nice work! And the imagery is nice too.

it's a long, beautiful statement that sticksinthehead. LOVE. -wallflower.

so do i, darling. favorites

This is so beautiful...you have such a talent for details that make the imagination wake up.

I love it - I have nothing to criticize. I like the structuring, and I enjoyed the beginning and end. Definitely going on my favorites list.

- Super Shayde

This is brilliant. I love the theme.

oh my god, this is so great. i love the way you wrote it, i love the title, i love all the words. your writing is so great! you and this poem must go on my favourite's list.

absolutely love this one. only thing that stood out to me was the repetition of "teeth" in lines 12 and 13. and that only because i'm feeling very persnicketity right now (love that word!). your images and thoughts are definitely part of your ongoing stroke of brilliance (which has turned from a stroke, i must say, into a whole beautiful painting). I love the allusions to Chanel and Snow White, especially the repetition of the latter. The first and second stanzas really speak to me, the cubic zirconia line in particular. this is going on my favorites. absolutely LOVE this piece and your current torrent of glamour-society related topics. I also like the fact that this one isn't littered with unnecessary punctuation - sometimes it just gets on my nerves, takes away from the piece. I'm sure you know what I mean. Anyways, lovely, truly love-ly writing. More, yes please!

Cheers,-salt.

nice repition of the whole snow white thing.. beautiful & real descriptions