The Prologue was so good I could barely breathe from the subconscious shock of recognition that seems to accompany brilliant writing.The 1st Chapter was somehow not as real, so I didn't dare read on. But thankyou; for the Prologue.

*doesn't feel like logging in -_-*

Interesting. I didn't think it was _that_ confusing...I mean, I was kind of wondering what was going on in the prologue, but some of that was explained in Chapter One.

But seriously, you don't know how much inspiration this gave me to go write something.

Unfortunately, I have homework to finish :-(

-Chibi

wow...I like it very much, I was so into I didn't even hear my mom calling me, seriously, she almost kicked me outside because she thought I was ignoring her. this is going on my favorites.

Really, Neko, you're far too ** yourself. You have made vast improvements! *Thinks back on HITS with a small shudder* And you have improved in your clarity! Except for once or twice in the prolouge, I've always known who was doing what and what was happening. Excellent! An interesting idea, as well. Quite compelling. Keep up the good work.

~Your adoring partner

Great job!