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| LadyVerse 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abusedum da da dum...very cool. 1984 is one of my favorite books of all time, and you adapted the themes very well. good job. |
| Death Sentence Heritage 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI love 1984... one of the best books ever written. This was good, if not slightly cliched. |
| Infinite Abyss 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. |
| Akhenaten 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's totally cool man! It's like 1984, only not completely obvious so it makes sense to someone who hadn't read it... at least I think it would... beautifully worded you rule! |
| youzi 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abusewhoa this is really deep..won't pretend to understand all of it but i really liked the image of "always looking for tell-tale signs of their presence in my supposed haven. Can they see me? Are they watching now? A suspicious portrait, grim and silent"..intriguing...do keep writing =D |