I have read 1984 before, so I dare say that your poem is a fitting tribute to the book.

dum da da dum...very cool. 1984 is one of my favorite books of all time, and you adapted the themes very well. good job.

I love 1984... one of the best books ever written. This was good, if not slightly cliched.

Great poem.

It's totally cool man! It's like 1984, only not completely obvious so it makes sense to someone who hadn't read it... at least I think it would... beautifully worded you rule!

whoa this is really deep..won't pretend to understand all of it but i really liked the image of "always looking for tell-tale signs

of their presence in my supposed haven.

Can they see me? Are they watching now?

A suspicious portrait, grim and silent"..intriguing...do keep writing =D