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| Chell-o Bodello 2005-07-23 ch 1,  | abuseAww ... so sad. And you can see the emotion behind it. If I tried to write something like this, it'd come out all ... weird. ~ Lunchi |
| Donnatella 2005-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful and romantic, like a sigh of passion... "No pain, no gain" :) |
| Princess-anna57 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThe rhyming kinda throws off the mood. But nice! Write on! ~Anna~ |