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| blacklives4ever 2005-06-17 ch 1,   | I like the imagery. The line "my tears soak into your heart" gave me a very vivid image of just that. Short and sweet, I really like it. Oh, but - I read your user info and I noticed you made a mistake. It's Prince Humperdink, not Wesley, who says "Please consider me as an alternative to suicide" in The Princess Bride. |