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| Cellar Door Mongrel 2005-07-18 ch 1, | That's awesome. |
| swaggering curses 2005-06-19 ch 1, | "Propped up by two pillows and / The invigorating need to be heard" -- I love it. |
| fragglerock 2005-06-18 ch 1, | Wow! Very cool; very vivid. I love the theme in it, and your style is very unique. My favorite lines: "His last breaths were upon him, death pouncing like it were a lion, and he a zebra, and the pencil shook in his bony hand, wretched and spotty with time and disease." |
| Princess-anna57 2005-06-17 ch 1, | Wow, what a nice poem. So well written. Write on! ~Anna~ |