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| Amelia Carr 2005-09-13 ch 1,  | abusegreat work! your format is interesting, though...but that's just me. good job, it's a nice piece. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI like the tone of this; it is very cletic in its origins. The depth of your detail was breathtaking. Much love,Juliet. |
| laughter at the funeral 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuseyou're right, it really has a celtic feel to it...you did an awesome job...i think the third to the last line lacks "is" or "'s" in the word that...oh and pls...if you have the time, pls do review some of my poems...thanks truly yours... |
| dragonelemental 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI love how you've used personification in there, it's really effective. Overall a really great poem, you definitely gotta write more. |