Sehr eindringlich mit den vielen Wiederholungen, mir gefielt es gut.

Nice. I like it. I think it could have used some line breaks or spaces between stanzas, but I like it nonetheless. It's very true, the "you don't accept us", if I got the meaning right. Well done.

Good song.

Twilight Starr

you're such an amzing writer... that was great... write more

That is amazing. It is so emotional and raw. I liked it. Keep writing.