omfg?! This was incredible! So why does your profile say u suck at writing? *sigh* You're way better than I am! Great job!

WOW! This story is very interesting. I really liked it! Sometimes we all wonder where the heck we went wrong...

-YuLian

I thought I'd reviewed this a long time ago, but I couldn't find one on the reviews page. Anyway, I should have; I've read this story twice before. A lot of grief, a lot of quality, and a very heartbreaking theme. It's sensually disturbing and yet it touches on something that all young girls seem to face--not necessarily to the same degree--that is, wishing to go back and be a little girl again, to restore innocence and to never have been violated by a person, by the media, whatever. It's a very impacting piece; very honest and thought-provoking, well done.

This is definitely a very poigniant story. It's very sad, but very real. Reality is often harder to portray than fantasy. Good work.

that was so sad. your writing is very unique. i don't it needs any more improvement. it was fantastic

This story was amazing. The atmosphere seemed so real, and the characters were absolutely believable. I really don't think this can be improved much further, although I have to agree with another reviewer. The italic thoughts do break up the flow. It did cause a certain effect, however, that made the character's regret pretty tangible.

The detail in this is so precise...the scars, the dreary motel room, her regrets. I love the ending as well. Great job.

This is so sad but true! Thanks for the shoutie and the love! Gurl, ur poem fits with the "Am I Ready?" poem! Love ya bunches! Great imagery and excellent contrasting! Wonderful!

great sad one-shot

Oh my god. This was so good. This had got to be one of the best one-shots I've ever read. I feel really bad for Stephanie, even though this was only one chapter and it's only a story. But wonderful job. Amazing. I really must read more of your works < 3

Well, you do make it difficult to provide CC. I'd say it's gramatically flawless. If there is an error, I'm certain it's not your writing, but a simple typo. As far as what I think, umm, I don't know exactly. This isn't exactly something I can relate to. I do think it's exceptionally well done, I also think it's powerful. Truly you have an impressive amount of skill.

The girl, she threw away her life. Why would she do something like that.

woah, did she ever decide what to do about the little girl she used to be?this was very well written, and I did not see a single grammer flaw. great job! btw, I have reposted Darkening Days, with a few of your suggestions, can you tell me what you think?

You did a really good job on this, and the descriptions were amazing, especially the "cancer stick" part. I didn't find any typos or grammar mistakes, and I usualy can, so good job, and keep on writing!

This story depresses me...good imagery, though, although the girl kind of grossed me out a little when ti got to all her make up and how it was smearing and all her scars...yeah, good story, but its creepy.