I actually like the title, and I think it's a really interesting story. I love the part about Miss Weaver and I think Ariella is a likeable character. But if it's the middle ages, would she really say 'guy'?

If you would consent to wearing matching socks ( gags ) I believe you would loose a LOT of reviewers... Matching socks?... Tsk tsk...

yeh! update! anyway, funny, the whole whapping sequence.on the other hand, i'm still curious as to how the head master got murdered, or whoever it was. try to add something about that in please!

oh...i like this one. rather hilarious, might i say. anyway, you kept on saying you wanted some constructive critisism, and to be honest, i have none to give you. however, i think you did a real nice job on the characters- they seem to have their quirks that define them from the others. however, i would like to hear a little more about ethin. is he just a little character, or will he prove a lot bigger later?also, i updated Two-Tiki Island (you may not remember it, but you seemed amused when you first read it and reviewed- by the way, thanks for reviewing) so if you get the chance feel free to r/r it or anything else that suits your fancy.

WOOPEE! LOVE THIS AWESOME CHAPTER! Gosh, it's THE best!! Sean's diary? LMAO LMAO LMAO LMAO LMAO! i wanna see! Stupid prince... who's the new headmaster, and who the hell killed him? hmm? Mind telling?!?!? soo, hi 'manda... waz up? ok... you get a cookie cuz it was a rly rly rly rly rly rly rly rly good chappie... but i still want more. so yous better gets started on that next chappie... or else... DUN DUN DUN! Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah! Hee hee. gotta go.. write some stupid poems!

I forgive you... Or, I will forgive, if you update rather quickly! *gives you an adorible, hopfull look that you just CANT ignore*

I like this... I especially like the way we can read her Smat-**-Oh-So-Brilliant-Thoughts! Very cool!

I like it! Your sarcasm/humor is great. It makes me laugh. Nicely done.

ok...

And she's only 12 years old?

Okay...well your verb tense are inconsistant. You're going to need to fix that. Besides that your story is hilarious. It's always nice to see humorous works every now and then.

*laughs* I love it! Keep it up!

Hey, awesome! I like where it's going. Only, I think you need more adjectives to describe the imagery of the story. I'm kind of at a loss at what everything looks like. Also, try not to rush into the main idea. All in all, good story!