amazing, i loved it. the flow makes it run off the tounge real smooth (i read poems out loud, you can understand them better that way i think lol) and thank you for the review!

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i actually liked this one. Figured out it's a fire/piece of fire after reading it a few times. maybe use a different word than down in "down and down."

3 Awesome! Darkness for eternity! Tounges of flame!

Well done. I hope to see more of this.