...wow. That's powerful. Very impressive.

I love this too with the diction and figurative language. Quite nice.

Since you used "tear away face" in two poems, it seems to be a prevailing theme at least for the present. How bout you combine them both in a collection called Tear-Away Face or something and then it's alright to have that phrase twice. You can certainly expand upon it as well. Just a suggestion

That was great. You truly are a person and a half :) Keep it up, yo! ~TheCryingGame

Wow...O.O...this really made me think. I love the twist you gave it.

Whoa, this rocks so much. Sometimes when I read your poetry I forget you're 14 because of the powerful wording and clear messages you convey in your writing.

Love,

LlaMa