I've felt that way many times before, the plastics and feeling different...anyway, your poem was the sex!

Love, fruit.

Brilliantly written, even if it is very depressing! Nice work though, keep it up

wow. i really really like this poem. i can relate to it.

nice! good description-simple, and honest. my only suggestion is perhaps to cut down on the "and then"s. it's good to have a pattern but that phrase is very colloquial and becomes grating after repetition. I like it, though-I was with the girl every moment. well done.