This is truly a great story. I know how it is to have a story hanging and not knowing what comes next, but I do hope that eventually you just might update. 'Til then, thanks for what you did write. It's terrific.

YES! It's me again-the annoying civil war junkie ^.^
Good story-interesting plot- and descriptions are amazing -hands magical spork- good job.
Though I'm a bit disturbed by Casey...have you been stalking me or something?

Please review... this really is a fantastic story, and I would hate to see it deserted!

I love this story... Please keep updating!! I've always been facinated by mystic creatures from the sea... U rock my world!??! Lol See ya

Ah! Thank you so much for updating! I love the new chapter; was v. surprised at the kidnapping fiasco. I hope you will update again soon? Please? I anxiously await the next part of this fab fab fab story!

You are absolutely brilliant! I hope against hope against hope that you will finish writing this story, though apparently, you dropped it last year. I don't mean to push, but I have to know what happens! It is genius! And, not to mention, you have no idea how happy that whole thing with his mother made me. That they have a language barrier of sorts? Genius! Please, please, if you have any form of conscience, take pity and finish this story!

ha! idiots who try to use pure beauty to their own advantage! I like it. a couple things-take a close look at your third sentence; I don't think it gives the meaning you want. also-the last sentence seems a bit realistic, seeing as he just shoved her all over his boat. something a bit milder, perhaps. in any case, this is a unique piece and I enjoyed it.