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| Beautiful Rendition 2006-03-28 ch 1,  | abusei really liked this. i was raped a couple tiimes when i was 5...so maybe i can relate. i think you'd like my poem TOLD under this pen name. but we seem to have a lot in common. feel free to email me anytime |
| Plinky 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, amazing poem. I like the lack of capitals - emphasises the vulnerability of the child in the poem. Beautifully painted image. Really amazing poem. ; ) |
| Goddess Aurora 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseoh my, I feel so sorry for you that something so terrible had happened to you. This is a great poem. I can almost imagine how you felt. |
| poetic abortion 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abusevisually realistic and frightrening to think. so true. ~* noelle |
| lindserly 2005-07-31 ch 1, | abuseFrom what I take from the summary this is a true account from your point of view, and if I'm right in assuming that, I'm terribly sorry for you that you had to go through that. On a different note, this is well written so good job on that. |
| Twist3d Te4cup 2005-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell said. Sometihng similar happened to me, i know how it is. |
| Megalo-Otaku 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuseSickening... That wasn't real was it? |