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| Mitchy Sextacular 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseAs a writer I bow to you. Now that I'm active on fictionpress again, I would like to say that this is excellent. Keep it up, Mao and all that. - Mitchy S. |
| crackpot 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseMan, that was good. I love the alice bit. lewis carrol was awesome, but that's not the point. I really like the bit about , "maybe down the rabbit hole" |
| swaggering curses 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuseVery unusual. I've nevre done any drugs so I can't compare your poem to real life (oh darn), but I will say that you combined the drug use and the rabbit hole very cleverly. I like how some lines rhyme and others don't; it adds to the surreality. Quite nifty. |