As a writer I bow to you. Now that I'm active on fictionpress again, I would like to say that this is excellent.

Keep it up, Mao and all that.

- Mitchy S.

Man, that was good. I love the alice bit. lewis carrol was awesome, but that's not the point.

I really like the bit about , "maybe down the rabbit hole"

Very unusual. I've nevre done any drugs so I can't compare your poem to real life (oh darn), but I will say that you combined the drug use and the rabbit hole very cleverly. I like how some lines rhyme and others don't; it adds to the surreality. Quite nifty.