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| Rakira9 2005-07-27 ch 1,  | abusesounds like summer here. lol. i like how u connect descriptions of the weather in away that makes us actually feel it with our own bodies. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-21 ch 6, | abuseSo sad! |
| somefreakylooknchick 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abusewhoa. That's how I feel everyday lol.(I live in Louisiana) yay.You're a kick butt writer |
| Ryter 2005-06-30 ch 6, | abuseInteresting. Odd, but I like it. I like it! |
| Aithwayth 2005-06-26 ch 6, | abuseI must admit that these are very different but good poems. They really get the mind going. *Sorry it took me so long to review some of your works considering you did one of mine* |
| Cloud Burst 2005-06-22 ch 6, | abusekool poem! |
| Cloud Burst 2005-06-22 ch 4, | abuselol good one |
| Cloud Burst 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abusebeautiful |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-19 ch 5, | abuseQuite nice, I love that first line. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-19 ch 4, | abuseWell the jury certainly found him innocent... Apparently, not enough evidence against him... |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseLovely, each line seems bonded only by this thirst... |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-18 ch 6, | abusea sad little poem..but yet true. I love it, great work! ~Sorrow~ |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-18 ch 5, | abusenot just a beautiful sight, but a loving sight. Great work! ~Sorrow~ |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-18 ch 4, | abuselol nice. I think he did it though but oh well, there's thing that lead to him being innocent, but after all he's rich, he can use that money lol ~Sorrow~ |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-18 ch 3, | abusepretty good. I like the realistic sense in the poem. ~Sorrow~ |