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| significant-dust-speck 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. I really like the 'meaningful reptition' of the whole piece. It really made it flow very nicely from one line to the next. A good theme too. So many people just aren't patient enough and that ends up stabbing them in the back later on. Anyway. I just wanted to let you know that this is I'm Not Broken operating under a new username. I decided I liked this one (significant-dust-speck) better. Once again. A fantastic poem. I hope you continue to grace us readers with your amazing insights. |
| Moonjava 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, I like it. |
| grandayatollah 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseI like it, but I don't think I'm the kind of person the wait. But that's just me ; ) |
| Jaemiz 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuse*applauds*now this is a masterpiece, well done.this poem just flows from line to line and is just amazing.well done. |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, I love this, I can see why it might take some time, the words flow so well! I love this one above all. It appeals to me in an interesting way. Keep it up. |
| eternal-reaper-kid 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abusev. cool, my psychotic friend, keep it up |
| ShadowPharoh 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abusefantastic! a truely unique and awesome poem! SP |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abusebeautiful and thouching. I love the extensive use of the words. for once..I found a girl who can actually wait for something like this. great work! ~Sorrow~ |