Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Meaningful Repitition

significant-dust-speck
2008-02-09
ch 1,
abuseAwesome. I really like the 'meaningful reptition' of the whole piece. It really made it flow very nicely from one line to the next. A good theme too. So many people just aren't patient enough and that ends up stabbing them in the back later on.

Anyway. I just wanted to let you know that this is I'm Not Broken operating under a new username. I decided I liked this one (significant-dust-speck) better.

Once again. A fantastic poem. I hope you continue to grace us readers with your amazing insights.
Moonjava
2005-08-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good, I like it.
grandayatollah
2005-06-27
ch 1,
abuseI like it, but I don't think I'm the kind of person the wait. But that's just me ; )
Jaemiz
2005-06-24
ch 1,
abuse*applauds*now this is a masterpiece, well done.this poem just flows from line to line and is just amazing.well done.
Moon-Chaser
2005-06-21
ch 1,
abuseWow, I love this, I can see why it might take some time, the words flow so well! I love this one above all. It appeals to me in an interesting way.

Keep it up.
eternal-reaper-kid
2005-06-19
ch 1,
abusev. cool, my psychotic friend, keep it up
ShadowPharoh
2005-06-19
ch 1,
abusefantastic! a truely unique and awesome poem!

SP
Sorrowful Dreams
2005-06-18
ch 1,
abusebeautiful and thouching. I love the extensive use of the words. for once..I found a girl who can actually wait for something like this. great work!

~Sorrow~
Return to Top