by the "But then he left of my dish" I mean to say that he left, left out of my sight and there is no way to see him again.

Better good! I like it Romania! One part I don't understand the 2nd to last sentence "he left off my plate?" But otherwise I like it!

I love how you abrubtly ended this! "And I realized... I love him." "him" doesn't ryhme, and it just sounds so cool! Like you going on and on, and then all of the sudden, the ending. good job!