I like it. It was really interesting. Good job.

wow...*insert scary music here* This was one of the most interesting stories i've read...I was instantly creeped out, but that is a good thing! I liked it a lot...It wasn't the average one-shot, and that is why i liked it! ^_^

Oh my God. This is the most unbearable story I have ever read! Get back at you! Well, what can I say when there's already a lot of readers read your fic. I bet that those who read , majority of them were too lazy to leave a review. Anyway, "Gambatte" in your future works ^^

Wow! This is one amazing premise! I find it really a quick one-shot of an enjoyable read.

If I were writing this, I'd write the plot a little differently. It certainly brings up a lot of questions.

Your main character's anger towards Eric isn't authentic. If he truly hated Eric for killing his wife, he wouldn't go out of his way to maintain an acquaintance with him. To stretch out this story,... you should not have your main character witness Eric's murder. Natalie/Devil should go around and squish a lot of people that were close to or enemies of the main character under the guise of protecting him.

It also needs a little editor's tweaking. Some sentences could use a transposing. The sentences that start out "While I was helping her..." and "Who are you?" could change place. I think a confused Natalie just reborn as a clone should be acting more human than that. And more bashful.

This is a really gem of a story among the usual crap that gets posted everyday.

Very nice.Unlike mine, it's more dramatic XP.Mine is more comedic, but if i wanna do a longer version I'd make it more serious.