Ah, wonderful, absolutely wonderful...and you say I write good poetry...I hate writing poetry. I loathe it with a passion but it happens you know? And some people ENJOY it...that's what I don't understand and I think that's why sometimes I DO sit down and write it...it just does something to simplify my life and put it in English (or French if you're talking to my better half...) so to speak. I love this, positively LOVE it...

Yes, as I told you before about my stories, they are a mess. The breakdown that you mention that my Jace has? Haha, that's so funny cause in the version I have I've already edited that part out...I had completely forgotten about it honestly. I'd had that part out for months now...haha, I laughed...I know, I'm evil but I laughed. The spelling and grammar, that's all fixed by now and all the ellipses turned into periods due to the formatting that FictionPress had at the time. The wording in the story I found was completely and utterly 8th grade...so I upped it a little and sometimes you can actually tell how alive, awake, alert and enthusiastic I am at the moment I'm writing...it's sad. Really sad actually. So I do hope you continue to read, I do appreciate it. I'm sorry if you find it a little unrealistic at times...so do I. The story I've found is so different in the versions I have...I feel so bad for telling you to review this crud...well, I hope you have enough patience to get to the stuff that's at least a little recent...

Long Days and Pleasant Nights, Gaki

Woah...This poem rocked! I really love it. I don't really follow a format because maybe I don't know any...hm. I still think its great!

This sestina reminds me a bit of the first sestina I ever read. It flows well, which isn't something to be said of most sestinas. It's an easy form to complete, just not an easy one to make sound good. You've done it, darling.