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| Forever Forbidden 2006-11-04 ch 1,  | abuseI love your rhyme scheme, and the repetiveness doesn't annoy me at all. Usually, in other poems, it really bugs me, but this one fit very will. The tension is palpable, and you did a very good job. -Helen |
| FunkyFlower16 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuseOh...my...god! this is just so incredible! u hav an awesome talent here. i love the lines in bold and the rhyming is fantastic. goin on my favs! plus i was just reading ur bio and i'm from UK too! |
| Anna178 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuseAnother really amazing song. I'm running out of compliments, lol. You're too good. i seriously consider you the best songwriter I review. But dont tell any of the others that. ANNA |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2005-06-20 ch 1, | abuseinspiring!! I especially liked "It's like I'll be fighting foreverJust to keep it all together(Freeze, breathe, freeze, breathe)"...it's really me in a nutshel...keep it up...and so sorry for not reviewing!!--pammy- |
| someday-i-will 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseVery powerful chorus, nice work. |
| twistedtruths 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseso great, i really loved it. awesome song. very powerful. |
| Broken Waiting Angel 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI UBER APOLOGIZE FOR THE LACKING! ^-^; but me is back and all is well! I luff this especially how it's written. "(Freeze, breathe, freeze, breathe)" then normal text then bold text for chorus. great job! ^-^ |
| blackrosestears 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI liked that, especially the (freeze, breathe) parts. Good job. |
| HauntedMisery 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesme, great work!! |
| simpleplan13 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI love the chorus and the repition of the first line.. awesome song |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseMy throat constricts after reading this poem, powerful! |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abusetunnel eh... very nice :D *smiles at evil ideas that arise* awesone! |
| poetic abortion 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abusejust as heart rendering as phobia, I adore this triligy. wonderful, wonderful song. ^__^ love it. ~* noelle |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abusethis is really good. I love the chorus and the flow! very touching. Great work! ~Sorrow~ |