I liked this chapter. Though I hate it when the author makes two people who are MEANT to be together and they mess around until they finally realize... Well, I don't mean to be a party pooper.

Great chapter. I'm off to the next one!

Abuse really strikes a nerve with me. Not that I was ever abused, but they really shouldn't let people like that be parents.

Great story, keep it up. I'll review the later chapters too.

Beautiful, as usual. I absolutely love Adrian, and Bryce is growing on me like a fungus- quick and uncontrollable. Lol, I know that was corny. But anyway, my whole point is that you're really talented and I hope you continure to write. You really capture the characters well. Please update. Look forward to hearing from me again! Oh, and happy belated birthday! :-)

really great chapter! i hope adrian's mum ends up ok... please continue!

i feel so bad for Adrian and his mom, this chapter made me cry! good, but sad!

this is really good, one thing i'm a little confused about is that earlier you said ellie was scared of the dark, but when she's upset, she locks herself up in the closet in the dark and insists Adrian turns the lights off... brilliant other than that though

i think that it sweet to see that adrian showed his emotions. i like this story. and i was surprised that u updated so early. cant wait till u update again. i could write even more, but my brain has malfunction.

Sad update in most repsects, quirky in others. I really liked it.

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Great job.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Wow that was a powerful chapter. Poor Adrian. When is Elliot going to tell him that Erik is gay? And sadly I know people like Adrian's mother. In fact my best friend is like that. I hope his mom can get her act together before its to late. I look forward to your next chapter!

Oh well I think I said something along the lines of I heart this story so much more because you update super soon unlike another of my favs that hasn't been updated in three months or so. Awsome chapter once again.

I like this chapter a lot.

I think Adrian really needed a good cry and I'm glad that he got that out. I have a feeling that his mother will still end up in a body bag. That bastard really pisses me off. And the fact that he's a policeman...god.

Never trust the popo.

I can just picture vividly the rings around Adrian's mother's wrists and that just angered me more. Argh...

Your updates are faster, I've noticed. That fact makes me want to prance around and do a little jig.

And the Disney Pocahontas IS disappointing. Disney and their quest for more money all while corrupting the childhood fairy tales and fantasies that made children's hearts flutter with joy.

Damn the Man.

YAY. I LOVED IT.

I honestly thought that I was the only one who felt that way about Pocahontas.

I understand how Elliot feels about Erik, its sad to have your best friend torn away from you. Your story evokes such emotion, Ugh... I LOVE it.

The repetetive part is true, but this story is one in a few that has made it to 33 chapters and still has a lot to go. I'm pretty sure that no matter how it ends, I'd still love it. If this ever gets published (hopefully it will) then I will definitely buy it and read it more than I should. The thing with grammar is that it all depends on how the author likes to write. Any story can be read through to find errors to be fixed, but everything can be made better; almost everything. It all depends on how the author wants the point to come across. Sure there are always the few punctuation and spelling errors, but that's easy to fix; what really matters is how you change the words to make the story better. Which, by the way, is already terrific. You do a very good job at displaying emotions and it really brings the story to life!

Oh God..I hope she doesn't end up in a bodybag. Please Jammi dont let that happen. I know somebody must always die in these dramas but...come on now. Let it be that jackass of a father...please.

waugh! *SNIFF, SNIFF*...WAUGH!