The playful banter between Adrian and Ellie is adorable but your grammatical errors is making it hard for me to keep up x_x I still really like how the story is going though :D

I thought this was really cute but in need of a read-over. There were some minor mistakes but besides that, I liked it :)

well i like it so far! i am drawn in already by the way you have already shown an established relationship at a young age. it makes it more understanding on what will happen in the story,

love CharlieandLola

I just finished reading your story and I must say that I am fairly impressed all around. However, one thing about it irks me to no end. The story title comes from the song she chose for her final dance before the cancer could take over. You talk about her practicing and everything. Why isn't the actual performance a part of the story? I know that Adrian is going through a lot at that time, but since you wrote in split pov why isn't Elliot's piece in there?

Gr8 story I lvd it

I hate Alyssa!

shes such a bitch,

and Adrian is so stupid, :(

i dont like him anymore!

I agree, Adrian is so stupid, telling her

he loves her? ughh.

Just wanted to say i loved your story! :)

this was a really good story. congratulations on a well written read!

I loved this story! I really liked that it wasnt all roses and sunshine. It was very well written and really descriptive. I love Adrian & Ellie together. & Sasha & Bryce are halarious & work great together. I dont like the ending though. I really wasnt expecting them to be a lightswitch couple (off and on). They really struck me as a couple who would stick together through thick and thin. Maybe break up once at the most. But its your story. I really liked it though :-)

Great story...thanks

I really like your stuff but I think you and commas need to get together more often if you get what I mean... but then again, that's just my opinion.

Ha, overweight? She is not! Actually, Ellie's technically underweight. Damn! Why is Erik gay? I really liked him *pout*.

Oh! And I love the length of your chappies.

Ba-da-ba-ba-ba, I'm lovin' it, even if it changes POV too many times for my taste. But grammar check, because sometimes you have spelling errors and wrong punctuation. And is "tondue" really spelled "tondue"? I dunno, I'll look that up. GO BALLET! (If you look in my profile, you'll probably see that ballet is my life. And I love Billy Joel, and my favorite BJ song is probably "Piano Man" or "Vienna." AND WHY DOES BILLY JOEL KEEP POPPING UP IN MY LIFE? (It's a long story, my if you want to hear it, it's the first section of Shades of Grey-you're not obligated to read the rest unless you want to.)

Just wanted to tell you it's good (and I love the name Elliot!),

Acantha

question, are you going to do a sequal for this story? i am really intrested how they turn out. :]]