Reviews for When Doves Cry
Octello 3/30/08 . chapter 26
I'm so happy that they love each other!

Adrian's mom is... horrid. I hate, hate, hate her.
Octello 3/30/08 . chapter 25
Augh! I've been a bad reviewer. So, anyway... Loved this chapter, loved, loved, loved. I think Sasha is my favorite character, because she's so clever.
Octello 3/23/08 . chapter 24
I laughed out loud at the conversation with Sasha and the "eye-rape" part. This is great!
Octello 3/23/08 . chapter 23
They're the cutest dysfunctional couple, ever. I'm happy their finally friends again.
Octello 3/23/08 . chapter 22
Thank you for this chapter. I'm so glad that they got to yell at each other, they needed it!
Octello 3/23/08 . chapter 21
Oh, Adrian. Why are you so dumb? Can't you see that if you can find and opportunity in every conversation to bring up Elliot, that you probably belong with her?
Octello 3/21/08 . chapter 20
Oh no! Her dad!

Brenna is, like, annoying... Yeah...

Erik is so sweet in a sort of "lack of social skills" way. Kissing her to distract her, haha!
Octello 3/19/08 . chapter 19
I don't know if I agree with Roberts or not. Obviously, Elliot isn't doing so hot and all, but... Argh! What is Elliot without her dance!
Octello 3/19/08 . chapter 18
You must have done a ton of research on cancer treatments. My hat is off to your dedication!
Octello 3/19/08 . chapter 17
Whew! I did it! I read the long chapter! And it was good.

"Your collar bone is nowhere near your ass, idiot." I laughed really hard at that.

Good for Adrian for being a man about that idiot Alyssa. I hope *she* dies. Being mean and slutty. Blegh.
Octello 3/19/08 . chapter 16
I have a love/hate relationship with Erik. Sometimes I love him, and then he bugs me! Augh.

But I like the character of John. :)
Octello 3/19/08 . chapter 15
Ugh, poor Ellie. How insulting, to be made a fundraiser of!
Octello 3/17/08 . chapter 14
I like Sasha a lot. That is what I have to say.

And also, dances are the root of all evil. Yep.
Octello 3/17/08 . chapter 13
Ballerina's have a higher chance of tearing leg muscles than football players or soccer players. Just as a little boost of confidence for poor Erik, there. :)
Octello 3/17/08 . chapter 12
I'm rooting for Ellie to rip Alyssa's jugular out with her nails. Haha! No, but seriously, I really don't like Alyssa. Great job on developing such a freakin' well-rounded villian! Just the kind of girl that deserves to have her hair catch on fire.
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