Reviews for Girl Number Seven

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a beginner 2008-06-12 ch 4,	abuseupdate plz
atreyu love 2007-07-30 ch 4,	abusehaha, omg that kid was hilarious XD haha. update!
Anne 2005-09-06 ch 4, anon.	abuseFabulous story!You MUST make more, if not I shall die!Lol, I really love your stories though, keep up the great work!
allTHEORY 2005-08-27 ch 4,	abuseHaha, cute. I wonder what will happen in these four hours alone with Aisha ... Keep up the good work, man. -jayne
Heather F. C 2005-08-19 ch 4,	abuseaw, it was nice. i hate little brats! lol. update soon
Heather F. C 2005-08-19 ch 2,	abusei really liked it, rob is so cute! and i loved the perspective you have for him,seems so accurate...
The Death Whisperer 2005-08-08 ch 4,	abuseUPDATE NOW! PLZ? PLZ? PLZ? U HAVE TO UPDATE!
BadSweets 2005-08-07 ch 4,	abuseHey! Very intriguing story. Come on, what happens next? It's HILARIOUS, too XD I love woman-hating Rob. Woman-haters rock. Ben was awesome too, will we be seeing him again? I love the way you did Rob's view. I like the way he thinks and I think you presented it very nicely. Mudrashka or whatever her name is spelt was FUNNY too. Will we discover whether she's 30 or not?! =D Maybe Rob'll still make it to his appointment? wants so badly to find out I really love the concept here in this story.
CrystalDusk 2005-08-03 ch 4,	abusehahahahahaha! stuck in a lift together! classic. but still funny. good stuff.
scuttlebutt 2005-08-02 ch 4,	abuseFour hours? Lmao. Please update soon!!
SouledChampion 2005-08-02 ch 4,	abuseFunny so far. Update soon.
ellabella 2005-08-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseaisha... is that pronouced eye-e-sha? or a-e-sha? i have a friend whose name is ayesha and it's pronounced the first way. i'm just curious... this was a great chapter. i like his sarcasm with the -"Come on, Rob. Hit the button before she catches up. Come on! Press it!" and -"Was I really that nice? Obviously not. I jammed the 'G' button with all the force my fist could gather." they were great! i feel so inspired to write a first person POV who is a sarcastic areshole/**. that was great! i love your humor. the elevator thing is cliche, but meh. i like it anyways. it IS an effective way to get them confined in a small space and have them hash out their problems. so his back is still in pain? i wonder if aisha were to help him (she does workout does she not? she might know some handy things about a disgruntled spine) that he would feel a little less. . . like attacking her? ah, i still can't get over the "obviously not". i can picture him saying it with an attitude of "O-vious-Lee NoT" which is kind of girly but bitchy at the same time so it might suit him. i gotta go. cya later! ellabella
Sendy 2005-08-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseOh my goodness!! i love this! Please please continue!! :D
Walking through a Wall 2005-08-01 ch 4,	abuseThis is such a unique story! I really think that you should describe Aisha a bit more though. She seems like a grouchy person with a great body. Give her a little more personality. But other than that, it's great! Susan P.S. Could you review my story? I need some major critisism and I'm getting slightly desperate for reviews. Ah well, I suck.
CircleStream 2005-08-01 ch 4,	abuseYeah! This idea is awesome! Very unique. Great characters too, Rob is the unrelenting but extremely vulerable type, huh? Love those... I have this awkward feeling Aisha ISN'T number six, or simply just isn't for him. The "raven-haired" girl however...seems promising to me. ;) Oh, sorry, weird brain moment. But that's right, correct? Haha. If I'm wrong, I probably sound like a brainless know-it-all, but I'm pretty sure the "raven-haired" girl is something... Hm. This story is great! Update soon!

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