update plz

haha, omg that kid was hilarious XD haha.
update!

Fabulous story!You MUST make more, if not I shall die!Lol, I really love your stories though, keep up the great work!

Haha, cute. I wonder what will happen in these four hours alone with Aisha ... Keep up the good work, man.

-jayne

aw, it was nice. i hate little brats! lol. update soon

i really liked it, rob is so cute! and i loved the perspective you have for him,seems so accurate...

UPDATE NOW! PLZ? PLZ? PLZ? U HAVE TO UPDATE!

Hey! Very intriguing story. Come on, what happens next?

It's HILARIOUS, too XD I love woman-hating Rob. Woman-haters rock. Ben was awesome too, will we be seeing him again? I love the way you did Rob's view. I like the way he thinks and I think you presented it very nicely. Mudrashka or whatever her name is spelt was FUNNY too. Will we discover whether she's 30 or not?! =D

Maybe Rob'll still make it to his appointment? *wants so badly to find out*

I really love the concept here in this story.

hahahahahaha! stuck in a lift together! classic. but still funny. good stuff.

Four hours? Lmao. Please update soon!!

Funny so far. Update soon.

aisha... is that pronouced eye-e-sha? or a-e-sha? i have a friend whose name is ayesha and it's pronounced the first way. i'm just curious...

this was a great chapter. i like his sarcasm with the

-"Come on, Rob. Hit the button before she catches up. Come on! Press it!"

and

-"Was I really that nice?

Obviously not.

I jammed the 'G' button with all the force my fist could gather."

they were great! i feel so inspired to write a first person POV who is a sarcastic areshole/**. that was great! i love your humor.

the elevator thing is cliche, but meh. i like it anyways. it IS an effective way to get them confined in a small space and have them hash out their problems. so his back is still in pain? i wonder if aisha were to help him (she does workout does she not? she might know some handy things about a disgruntled spine) that he would feel a little less. . . like attacking her? ah, i still can't get over the "obviously not". i can picture him saying it with an attitude of "O-vious-Lee NoT" which is kind of girly but bitchy at the same time so it might suit him. i gotta go. cya later!

ellabella

Oh my goodness!! i love this! Please please continue!! :D

This is such a unique story! I really think that you should describe Aisha a bit more though. She seems like a grouchy person with a great body. Give her a little more personality. But other than that, it's great!

Susan

P.S. Could you review my story? I need some major critisism and I'm getting slightly desperate for reviews. Ah well, I suck.

Yeah! This idea is awesome! Very unique. Great characters too, Rob is the unrelenting but extremely vulerable type, huh? Love those...

I have this awkward feeling Aisha ISN'T number six, or simply just isn't for him.

The "raven-haired" girl however...seems promising to me. ;)

Oh, sorry, weird brain moment.

But that's right, correct? Haha. If I'm wrong, I probably sound like a brainless know-it-all, but I'm pretty sure the "raven-haired" girl is something... Hm.

This story is great! Update soon!