...I'm impressed. First, it flows very well and has a well-structured rhyming scheme that enhances that. Second... It's thoughtful, thought-provoking and true. It makes me conjure up images of homeless people living out on the streets, or other such people...

This is a good poem that doesn't end or begin abruptyly, but instead is wrapped up quite nicely. The first two and last four lines are, in my mind, the best. =) Very well done!