|Reviews for Wolf Destiny|
| Estelin 11/1/06 . chapter 3
this story is excellent. can't wait for more
| freeze-dirtbag 6/23/05 . chapter 3
I like how you picture the way wolves talk. 'The figure squealed in pain as it struggled in pain.' It would sound better as 'The figure squeeled as it struggled in pain.' other than that there are a few misspelling things. But it was still good. Can't wait till the next chapter.
| freeze-dirtbag 6/19/05 . chapter 2
ur story is pretty good, I really like how it is unfolding. You tell it really well but, the way that you could make it longer woud be to add more descriptions, and when you are dialoguing you could skip a paragraph everytime someone else : "Whats up Ben?" said Elle. (enter) "Nothing Elle." said see? it looks more proffenssional that way. All in all its a good story that needs a little tidying up.