Hm, very beautiful and dark,really makes you wonder. Great job

Jaded,SwimmerGirl

this is a very powerful and emotional piece. you're growing more and more as a writer every day (aww... lol) i loved the use of language and imagery; very creative and descriptive. that's one of the best qualities of my favorite poets. keep writing, i'm sure there are more great pieces to come.

thanks for the (sort of) review. i miss y'all too, and trust i'll be listening hard as i can.

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Woah, child. Slow down and breathe. Excellent poem, but slow down. please

Oh my word. This is a VERY powerful piece. Profound and beautiful in a dark, morbid way. Wow.

On another note, you reviewed my poem "Perhaps," asking if the charecters are two females, and yes, the two people I had in mind were. Just thought I'd let you know. Heh.

Keep writing. You have wonderful potential and the talent to go far.

ohmigod! this poem is absolutely fantastic! i dunno what 2 say tho. really sad and lonely but a work of wisdom! luv this so much i'm gonna print it and show it every1 (as soon as my printer's working)! definitely going on my favs. makes absolute sense, no forced rhyming and a beautiful poem! keep writing!