 Slowly Sinking 2005-07-03 . chapter 1Very powerful, especially at the end. Really moving poem; great work. |
 ShadowPharoh 2005-06-19 . chapter 1the rhyme scheem was great, and i loved how you didn't capitolize. fantabulous!
SP |
 simpleplan13 2005-06-19 . chapter 1and so suddenly dissapear...disappear
its short but awesome it flows well & the ending is so sad and pwoerful |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-18 . chapter 1Gentle and sad. |