Reviews for A feeling
Slowly Sinking 7/3/05 . chapter 1
Very powerful, especially at the end. Really moving poem; great work.
ShadowPharoh 6/19/05 . chapter 1
the rhyme scheem was great, and i loved how you didn't capitolize. fantabulous!

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simpleplan13 6/19/05 . chapter 1
and so suddenly dissapear...disappear

its short but awesome it flows well & the ending is so sad and pwoerful
Nobody-n-Particular 6/18/05 . chapter 1
Gentle and sad.