i did exaggerate a little in the 'dads birthday' poem u reviewed me on, but still thanx. this poem is fantastic. i love the way u can continue on 1 topic for so long, especially on raisins. a beautiful poem!

I really like this. If flows well and has a nice...um...moral I guess (theme? I don't know the word). Anywho, I like the form from thing. One thing I did notice was that you mention raisins a lot in the beginning and at the end ... eh, not so much. I'm not suggesting you add more in the middle, but maybe tone down the beginning. Well, I did like it. Good Job.

P.S. Thanks for the reviews and I think you spelled guarantee wrong in your profile (just so you know).

I thought you didn't believe in God.

Or did he just worm his little self into your poem?

Ither, either way, it's all a wonderfully rhymed poem.

Oh! This is very different from what I usually read! Very unique! I like how you use a raisin to display patience, faith, and hope :) Very inspirational! ::applauds:: Good job!

PS: Thank u for such the kind note. You're a talented poet urself!

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