great Haiku! i really liked it! thanks for your reveiw btw i really appreciate it -

it sounda like washington DC... after visiting different things there...

This is good! I like it!

Keep up the good work.

P.S. my poem is now fixed. Finally

Yeah, freedom's a nice thing to have.

Julia.

Seemed bittersweet. The best things are. I Loved the description "lovely elixers".

On another note, you are fantastic at deciphering poems.

you know, i honestly don't understand haiku. but the 'lovely elixirs' part was pretty.

Sounds enchanting. You are lovely.

I really like the last line. Really nice.

WOWZA VERY DEEP AND EXCELLENT !

I live in Washington, so I love this one... so true. The last line is really interesting. Good job.

Well, I've never been to Washington, but this one was great! cio, hoellenwauwau

Here is a haiku

For my sake take it to heart

Go and kill yourself

I like the comparison you make. It might be freedom but it is mixed and might have a price later.

short.

Simple.

Sweet.

Perfect.

Solo.

Simple & yet perfectly conceived.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C