cool poem its neat

WOW.the ending of this poem makes us think!

I likey dis poemstop by if u get a chance i got soem new stuff yeaI like egss

wow...really good...i think this is one of my favorites...i think that this poem would make a very awesome song = )

I like this poem a lot. Its going on my favorites. =)

I think it's better as a poem too. It's a little too abstract (in a good way) to be a song. Too good to be a song. :P Me comparing it to mainstream stuff... I like the imagery, too.

Keep writing!