I like this alot. The undertones seem bitter, I'm not sure on your feelings towards the actually relationship but this poem. Yeah it seems bitter almost. Great work I love the picture you paint with the TV and the idea of silence under a conversation. Great work.much love-Kitty
Slience speaks volumes. This is great. I got the flow too, and again, great wording that painted an excellent image. Good line seperation too. I really like the "Stall-/-ing." *thumbs up*