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Reviews For: A Taste for Blood and Insulin

B.M. Brouse
2005-10-23
ch 2,
hey, that person was right, this does sound like Sweet Blood... only i bet it will be, like, way better:) dont worry about losing inspiration, in that case it's better to let a story,er, ripen for a while. Then you go back and read a bit of it and you're like, wow, i can do somewhat with this! trust me , i do that alot. If you just let it be, the plot bunnies will slowly die of boredom and one will be left. Usually. Or you go insane from not writing,lol. The writer's block will then lift for a few days at a time. C-ya.^_^
jainen-black
2005-10-18
ch 2,
UPDATE OR DIE lol no really update i am going crazy here. i need to know what happens. you know how to end a chap in a place where you will drive somebody crazy. lol keep writing :)
Juice-Box
2005-10-10
ch 1,
While I like this story it sounds a lot like a book I once read called Sweet Blood. That plot is very similar. But I still like your story as well and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

http://w.vampires.nu/pages/Books.cfm/ID/2186/PageID/22
Nickletastic
2005-07-28
ch 1,
Support I will! Good job.
fireydarkness
2005-07-24
ch 1,
that was kewl!
AubriannaKnight
2005-07-19
ch 1,
i love your story, you better update!
B.M. Brouse
2005-06-26
ch 1,
Mega Vamp Lover here! great story, i like how you write, interesting charecters. Update update update soon, and no, im not normally this hyper.^^"
yellowspottedzebras
2005-06-23
ch 1,
Hey that was slammin'. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.
Girl Anachronism07
2005-06-22
ch 1,
I like it! So how did she meet Mike? Is there something going on there? I'm sure this will all be answered later, but I'm impatient. Personally, I think she should have gotten a few more hits in on the prep, but it was still cool. I'm looking forward to more. Oh, I forgot the name of the author (but rest assured they're on my favorites) but in this other story I was reading, this goth girl was like, "I'm goth, I don't cry, I bleed" Kerry's screen name just reminded me of that and I love it, so yeah...great job.
Unmei-chan
2005-06-21
ch 1,
Wow, I love the ending of this chapter! I can't wait for more!
Tori
2005-06-21
ch 1,
It always makes me laugh when I read stories like this because all I can do is imagine what it'd be like if people at my school actually had classifications and if so, if they would actually stick with them... No preppie hate goth, goth hate preppie action going on at my school (too big. 2,500 students+). It's kind of creepy after all those stupid movies that try to make out cheerleaders to be the queen ** of the school actually hanging with the goth/rockers sometimes. *ha* Wierdies outnumber normies at my school so it's cool.Anyway, great story. Keep writing...
ShadowAddi
2005-06-20
ch 1,
Dude. this is a very good job. You shall continue! ^_^ Anyway, I can't wait for more. Please review mine. Chapter 4 is comming up soon. This is ShadowAddi, signing off.L8a.
Gin-Kaida
2005-06-20
ch 1,
more More MORE! I need, not want, but NEED to read more. You better get your but back on the computer and type until you can't type no more.

“So what if I am.” I smirked stressing every word. That has to be my favorite quote out of this story. There's a lot more in here that I like but I'm not going to put all of them.

Until next review, Ja Ne! =^.^=
corvina
2005-06-19
ch 1,
Nicely done! I appreciated your review on my latest fiction/experiment with words. This piece is well written, and I did enjoy it very much, despite the fact that I know absolutly nothing about diebetics! Your character reminded me of myself during this last year of high school [My nickname at school is the "crazy gothic psycho **", but I also get called things like a vampire or zombie chic. But I think it's funny!], and I actually have a friend named Mike that you captured rather well in your story...creepy, no? Ah well, anyways, I'd better be returning to my coffin before the sun rises...don't you hate that? (LOL) Actually, I'm not a vampire *pouts* but thanks again for your review! *is rather hyper at the moment* I'm going to go...drink coke! LOTS OF COKE! Muwahahahahaha! Alright, sorry for being scary. Bye now.

Corvina Richelle Morgan
Mimikay
2005-06-19
ch 1,
This seems like it could turn into something interesting. Ease up on the teenage slang though.
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