this is so beautiful . . . sad, but beautiful. glad to see you writing again

Oh, wow...

This is so sad, I hope that you'll write something about this, like a story to go with it or something, I don't know.

beautiful.~your Drow 218

Nice rhyming.

I loved your rhyming scheme- most definitely relatable- "back out of this weary hole, save my eyes and rescue my soul"- did you put a lot of thought into this? it seems so. reminded me of Ryan Adams. good job!