Reviews for Love, Questionable

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Hell's first Icicle 2005-11-11 ch 1,	abusegreat poem, really adresses the point, the last phrase esp, was realli... i dunno, i just liked it a lot >. died hovering around fretted lips and you resurrected them into a zombie’s half-sentence to say the proverbial “I love you” ‘ then it cannot have been love a great conclusion to the poem, unlike sum which seem relli unfulfilling. i love it!
Sinni 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is seriously awesome..I love how you've used so many words and described things in such a different yet impressive manner..this is class..
fragglerock 2005-07-08 ch 1,	abuseWow! I love the vividness of this poem and how I "get" it, as well as ((seemingly)) vice versa.
lackluster 2005-07-05 ch 1,	abusei like this. w o n d e r f u l imagery! the ending ties it all up really well. great work ~tuesday
The Magician (Joseph 2005-07-02 ch 1,	abuseI really like it. The poem does a good job to convey those silly relationships people get themselves into. Joseph
Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-25 ch 1,	abusethis is good. I like the flow. It started off slow and then gets better and better. It built up just nicely ~Sorrow~
jctstorage 2005-06-24 ch 1,	abuseThis is Luculent, other account. Here goes. :) First off, ah, Marlowe... it's always nice to see writers who have read the classics. Next, your imagery is so wonderful - the comparison between wedding bands and shackles, depending on perspective. I like how you use free verse but you keep it together by using a structured form - the "if" clause. The third stanza is awesome, the scientific jargon about love? It highlights your point - that's not love. The last "if" stanza - what a sucker punch. You really drive it home, the last two lines really wrap it up nicely. Your thoughts progress in a nice, smooth fashion all working up to those two lines, great job. ~Luc
Jaemiz 2005-06-24 ch 1,	abusei liked the way that your poem seemed to concentrate and slowly build up to the last two sentences. It flowed really well and is an interesting view on what love is or isn't.nice!!
Luculent Perspicacity 2005-06-23 ch 1,	abuseThis was lovely - I will review it properly when I have more time (I won't be signed in, though, since you can only review signed in once...) but I wanted to give you a preliminary "I liked it." It's refreshing to see a poem about what love isn't... (I am guilty of the other, what love is, I must admit. I hope only that my meager attempts at poetry are as inspiring despite their cliche topics.)
WickedSilence 2005-06-22 ch 1,	abuseThe way you built up the poem to its ending was wonderful. The last two lines topped the tension perfectly; the words dashed it away with a sigh of sadness. Although I liked the images evoked by your words, I found the rhythm a little broken in the longer lines. Disregarding that, you wrote a very nice poem. Keep up the good work.
MaHaLLz 2005-06-20 ch 1,	abuseyesh, that's very true. i liked it, especially the last three stanzas. and thanks for reviewing my works! they're very much appreciated!
cynicaldays 2005-06-20 ch 1,	abusethat's a powerful stance to take.I'd bet a thousand weeping lovers would disagree. Wonderful imagery though, i'll give you that.
secret thoughts revealed 2005-06-20 ch 1,	abusehi like the new pen name? great poem the summary lies you say you know nothing of love but you know more then you think by the sound of that poem
account not in use 2005-06-20 ch 1,	abuseLove the images. The way it kind of loosely comes together, the gentle, almost floaty way you write it, is wonderful.
Aquafied 2005-06-19 ch 1,	abusei liked the way your portrayed non-love. in a sensical and whimsical (not in the slightest though) wonderful.

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