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Reviews For: I'm Not Fooled
Mary Phoenix 2005-12-05 . chapter 1
Haha yes!! Awesome! Everyone feels like that. Although, usually, I feel like the worst of the best, which is a better feeling by far. If you haven't realized it yet, I'm going through your poems. They make me happy, they're good, and you tell me to review.
Keisha Russell 2005-07-21 . chapter 1
Oh! Booya! Frog!

it's lovely, nice meter, and the juxstaposition of winning and losing and princes and frogs.

Like it alot.
Faithiny 2005-06-29 . chapter 1
I like your take on 'the lesser of two evils' theme. The poem rhymes, which is even better. Wonderful comparisons as well. Great job!
Leeona Trance 2005-06-20 . chapter 1
Sad reality we live in... but that's the way of the world.

Sweet poem, even though it has a sad message.

~Leeona Trance
DamascusDragon 2005-06-20 . chapter 1
lol i see me...
account not in use 2005-06-20 . chapter 1
Different, and very good. I like how it's short, but still conveys the emotion you can get from a longer poem.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-19 . chapter 1
Hey now I am a frog! I feel insulted. *sniff* Frogs are awesome! Perhaps bog would suit, or smog... Jk, I am just being goofy. I enjoy the emotions you present here, and quite well too for the length of the piece.
Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-06-19 . chapter 1
amusing. :smiles: it's originality is refreshing.

EB
GC Age 2005-06-19 . chapter 1
Very good! I liked it but just wondering what/who are you talking about?

Good work becuase you left me with a question wanting me to read on more and created a suspense.
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