 Mary Phoenix 2005-12-05 . chapter 1Haha yes!! Awesome! Everyone feels like that. Although, usually, I feel like the worst of the best, which is a better feeling by far. If you haven't realized it yet, I'm going through your poems. They make me happy, they're good, and you tell me to review. |
 Keisha Russell 2005-07-21 . chapter 1Oh! Booya! Frog!
it's lovely, nice meter, and the juxstaposition of winning and losing and princes and frogs.
Like it alot. |
 Faithiny 2005-06-29 . chapter 1I like your take on 'the lesser of two evils' theme. The poem rhymes, which is even better. Wonderful comparisons as well. Great job! |
 Leeona Trance 2005-06-20 . chapter 1Sad reality we live in... but that's the way of the world.
Sweet poem, even though it has a sad message.
~Leeona Trance |
 DamascusDragon 2005-06-20 . chapter 1lol i see me... |
 account not in use 2005-06-20 . chapter 1Different, and very good. I like how it's short, but still conveys the emotion you can get from a longer poem. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-19 . chapter 1Hey now I am a frog! I feel insulted. *sniff* Frogs are awesome! Perhaps bog would suit, or smog... Jk, I am just being goofy. I enjoy the emotions you present here, and quite well too for the length of the piece. |
 Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-06-19 . chapter 1amusing. :smiles: it's originality is refreshing.
EB |
 GC Age 2005-06-19 . chapter 1Very good! I liked it but just wondering what/who are you talking about?
Good work becuase you left me with a question wanting me to read on more and created a suspense. |