| Reviews for collapse, |
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FrozenKiwi 1/8/06 . chapter 1Your poems creep me right the hell out. Good job! |
vonlan 8/17/05 . chapter 1o... i have no clue what to say to this, but this is a fairly easy to understand poem if you're speaking of an event. i can't judge an event, but what you wrote seems easily flowed.. |
citrus scented 8/12/05 . chapter 1christ, this is just...wicked. taut and bitter to read, wonderfully written. |
AntiPleasure 7/7/05 . chapter 1I like your styles. Most are quick to the point when telling a story and the images are painfully portrayed. Nicely done. Jenna |
Phat Models 7/4/05 . chapter 1sure how I could describe this...it was definately different...but I liked it. |
lackluster 7/2/05 . chapter 1i'm amazed with this poem. its definetly odd but it works. nicely done tuesday |
AboveTheSalt 6/27/05 . chapter 1ahh. this is beautiful. very unique subject choice and stanzas. i love the topic; oh so relate-able & captivating. lovely word choices, too. great poem. -salt. |
kalmia raphael 6/26/05 . chapter 1kind of surreal and sunglazed. a lifeguard that was a few minutes too late to save some kids or the waves were too strong so they killed him. funny that something so tragic can be discerned from a sandwich. very lyrical and pretty, ironically so. makes me think of people's old vacation photos. |
Nobody-n-Particular 6/23/05 . chapter 1What a prevalent image you write of. |
and flowers 6/22/05 . chapter 1hm. i think that i like it a lot |
linaeve 6/22/05 . chapter 1ugh. what terrible timing, truly. |
negligible fictional force 6/21/05 . chapter 1god, i just love the concept so much. -wallflower. |
miyoo 6/21/05 . chapter 1 wow you are good _ |
always gats b y 6/20/05 . chapter 1Ahh, I'm in love with this one! Nicely written. I loved the ending. ;D *favorites* |
Kristina 6/20/05 . chapter 1 Wow Claire! This is fantastic! Beautifully written! |