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| FrozenKiwi 2006-01-08 ch 1,  | abuseYour poems creep me right the hell out. Good job! |
| vonlan 2005-08-17 ch 1, | abuseo... i have no clue what to say to this, but this is a fairly easy to understand poem if you're speaking of an event. i can't judge an event, but what you wrote seems easily flowed.. |
| citrus scented 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abusechrist, this is just...wicked. taut and bitter to read, wonderfully written. |
| AntiPleasure 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI like your styles. Most are quick to the point when telling a story and the images are painfully portrayed. Nicely done. Jenna |
| Phat Models 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abusehm.not sure how I could describe this...it was definately different...but I liked it. |
| lackluster 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abusei'm amazed with this poem. its definetly odd but it works. nicely done ~tuesday |
| AboveTheSalt 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseahh. this is beautiful. very unique subject choice and stanzas. i love the topic; oh so relate-able & captivating. lovely word choices, too. great poem. -salt. |
| kalmia raphael 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abusekind of surreal and sunglazed. a lifeguard that was a few minutes too late to save some kids or the waves were too strong so they killed him. funny that something so tragic can be discerned from a sandwich. very lyrical and pretty, ironically so. makes me think of people's old vacation photos. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseWhat a prevalent image you write of. |
| and flowers 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abusehm. i think that i like it a lot |
| linaeve 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseugh. what terrible timing, truly. |
| negligible fictional force 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abusegod, i just love the concept so much. -wallflower. |
| miyoo 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abusewow you are good ^_^ |
| girl with rad i o 2005-06-20 ch 1, | abuseAhh, I'm in love with this one! Nicely written. I loved the ending. ;D *favorites* |
| Kristina 2005-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow Claire! This is fantastic! Beautifully written! |