Your poems creep me right the hell out. Good job!

o... i have no clue what to say to this, but this is a fairly easy to understand poem if you're speaking of an event.

i can't judge an event, but what you wrote seems easily flowed..

christ, this is just...wicked. taut and bitter to read, wonderfully written.

I like your styles. Most are quick to the point when telling a story and the images are painfully portrayed. Nicely done.

Jenna

sure how I could describe this...it was definately different...but I liked it.

i'm amazed with this poem. its definetly odd but it works. nicely done

tuesday

ahh. this is beautiful. very unique subject choice and stanzas. i love the topic; oh so relate-able & captivating. lovely word choices, too. great poem.

-salt.

kind of surreal and sunglazed. a lifeguard that was a few minutes too late to save some kids or the waves were too strong so they killed him. funny that something so tragic can be discerned from a sandwich. very lyrical and pretty, ironically so. makes me think of people's old vacation photos.

What a prevalent image you write of.

hm. i think that i like it a lot

ugh. what terrible timing, truly.

god, i just love the concept so much. -wallflower.

wow you are good _

Ahh, I'm in love with this one! Nicely written. I loved the ending.

;D

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Wow Claire! This is fantastic! Beautifully written!