Perfect question at the end. Great job.

like the overall feel of this poem. intriguing. just love it, as usual.

Love the title and idea. Great job!

wow - beautiful O.O

smoothly sensual and terrific choice of words here. well done!

absolutely love it. i believe you showed this to me quite some time ago and i fell in love with it then, too. you have such a (remarkable/gorgeous/breathtaking) way with words. glad you've posted. :)

-salt.

i liked the idea of the poem. 3rd stanza was my favourite. keep it up and don't stop writing.

Fascinating, with weaving in the musical element to torn seductions... I love the diction in this piece!

This is so amazing..your imagery is so beautiful. Keep writing!