Whoa...I think it's really interesting that this is about a snail, but it just seems so...I don't know, deep, I guess. Really really cool. Wow. So...what is schistosomiasis?

Cute and random. I like all the imagry.

Very vivid and descriptive. Constant movement makes this flow and continue well. interesting subject matter. very nice.

Wow, this is so great! I feel like complimenting it would demean it because it is too good for compliments... so I'll insult it! just kidding! I loved it, first because I like snails, but it was so much deeper than just a love of snails can go, so clever and a great way of expressing yourself. You rock!much love,akhenaten

My jaw really drooped and HOLY SHIT! that is a really interesting poem, i mean i gotta go read this, i only understood part of it. so i'm not the only on with snail on the brain? te he.. WRITE ON!

hehe, wow, this is great! I loved it. SNAIL FEVER! TheCryingGame

I feel so sluggish at the beginning and then the pace quicken with my heart. Quite nice!