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| Siia Faerie 2005-08-04 ch 1,   | Very good poem, I can definatly relate. You're a very talented writer, I hope you keep it up! Thanks for your review, and I apologize for not reviewing you back sooner. I hope you have fun at camp! |
| WarriorHeart 2005-07-16 ch 1, | beautiful. such anguish... really great job. |
| N. Browne 2005-07-08 ch 1, | Nicely Done. Emotional! -NB |
| dear rowan 2005-07-04 ch 1, | oh, im sure this has happened to you. tho its not bad poetry i cant deal w/ this emotional mumbo-jumbo. write about something that matters to people. or something simple. some of the greatest peotry ive read has been simple, a feather floating in the wind. all poetry doesn't need to be emotiona, describe a garden, a straving mother and her child (w/out the need to bleed and bleed and bleed all over your poetry) |
| section-light 2005-06-25 ch 1, | I absolutely love the way you word things! you're truly amazing! .(light). |
| dance of life 2005-06-23 ch 1, | That's so sad... very well-written! Great poem! |
| Munchin 2005-06-23 ch 1, | sad.. |
| Winter Reflections 2005-06-22 ch 1, | very emotional and powerful!! i love it!! thanks for the review/s!! i am going to read some of your other work now. farewell! |
| Crazy Biene 2005-06-21 ch 1, | powerful and very sad. gr8 poem. |
| Katana-Seishin 2005-06-20 ch 1, | Amazing...one of your best!! Continue writing, you have talent! |
| Unready 2005-06-20 ch 1, | Potent. |
| Procrastinating Fairy 2005-06-20 ch 1, | This is sad...and, unfortunately enough, I can relate. I, too, am going through some abuse. Although...I know that what I get is my own fault. Sigh. All that's explained in what I write though. I like this, though. I think I'm about to cry from reading it. |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-06-20 ch 1, | omg, wow, that's absolutely amazing, so powerful, I loved it. Solo. |
| Trilock 2005-06-19 ch 1, | Powerful. I wish more poetry on here would be emotionally raw as this. I certainly hope this hasn't happened to you, but this is a great poem. |
| NicolePartier 2005-06-19 ch 1, | i love the poem. the ending is especially good! very good! xoxo-Nicole |