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boys kiss girls 2006-03-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is so awesome! It reminds me of a local diner we have where I live thats open all night. One time we were in there at about 11 and saw about 15 other people we knew. Good job on this. I liked the Britney Spear's line and the twelve year old drama one as well. Good job.
e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-03-04 ch 1,	abuseVery very funny! This has to be one of my favorite haiku collections yet! Very wity/sarcastic at parts. Very inventive. They made me laugh, so brownie points for that. Keep it up, b/c this is great! P.s. thanks for the review!
Olivine 2006-02-20 ch 1,	abusei stayed at dennys with my friends for about three hours once. we stayed until midnight, though, not 2 AM. lol. my favorites would have to be...the britney spears one, haha that one was funny, and the 12 year old drama one, that one was funny and true. keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:\|:-
the naked civil servant 2006-02-20 ch 1,	abuseoh wow... i just got such vivid images whilst scrolling down this poem. the whole chrome/light/plastic/blueness of afterhours fast food greaseburntchilldreams maddening conversations you never can quite picture the next day. extremely gritty& real (high praise, high praise...) - i'm off to read more :)
mizu no kokoro 2006-02-15 ch 1,	abuseinteresting~ i find this so refreshing and intriguing, people certainly get inspired in the most unque ways^^ wonderful work! keep writing!
Chandra-Moon 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abuseI usually just can't stand haiku's, but I love this, and it probably has a lot to do with the way you wrote it. Beautiful imagery, little snapshots of other's conversations. I admit I like to spy on people; if only it weren't rude to stare! I like to watch and listen to thim, and this poem is so familiar to that. Great job.
scuttlebutt 2005-12-09 ch 1,	abuseI have to say, this was pretty dran funny!! Hilarious, and I've never even eaten at Denny's, lol. I love your haikus.
citrus scented 2005-09-29 ch 1,	abuseCowboys welcome here Leather boots clack in my eyes You can lasso me. - wicked, attitude , it sums up the setting so perfectly- its really like in there and i can feel the 2am ness and everything. i love: "Deep conversation Your head has too many holes Like my burnt bagel."but my favourite one was: "Twisted old man hands Dark secrets underneath nails Please don’t remind me. " it just hoolds so much, i can relate. anyway this is a wonderful collection of hiakus, very effective and deep as usual.
s m e l l . o f . r a i n 2005-08-29 ch 1,	abuse=grins= I like the last one- "Remember us here / Sharking mozzarelle sticks / Dreaming up the sky." I don't really know why... But it sounds really nice (and random). The middle line doesn't really seem to fit, but that makes it all the better. =) Some good Haikus here. ^^
reluctant writer 2005-08-26 ch 1,	abuseI liked them all. Very witty :). My favorites, though, would be: [grasshopper milkshakes/ captures my inner childhood/ wings stuck in my teeth.] I love the continuation of the metaphor. [Twisted old man hands/ Dark secrets underneath nails/ Please don’t remind me.] I liked the ominous tone of this one. And [Not enough napkins/ Cheapskates save by buying bulk/ May I use your sleeve?] :)
Alisha Marie 2005-08-15 ch 1,	abuseGreat job on this my favorite one wasabout the hangovers don't ask why but itmade me laugh...anyways great job!
Roth Jopalse Sammuels 2005-08-11 ch 1,	abuseYou are so awesome! Really! I wouldn't know if this is all in haiku format or not but it's awesome. Haikus are hard to write.
Aslan Israel 2005-08-07 ch 1,	abuseThough I can't say I've ever been to Denny's (sad, isn't it?) I know exactly what you mean. Great job on these; each was induvidual, yet tied into the whole theme. Nice.
The Melissa Occult 2005-08-04 ch 1,	abuseI like this, I like the all encompassing thought of this. Denny's at 2am. Wonderful. Sometimes insomia can be beautiful. Now I just have to find a Denny's not half an hour away. Nothing here stays open all night. I like this though. It gives me inspiration. Each of the haikus are individually tailored to different people or things. No two are alike and I like that. Beautiful dreams, have some starry night eyes as you look out the window tonight. S.P. P.S. Your review made me smile. It made me see the lunacy in my writing. Thanks. P.P.S. Have you ever tasted burgundy?
Precious Death's Whisper 2005-08-01 ch 1,	abuseHah, now I'm hungry. The poem itself is very good. You'll never fail to amaze me! Write on! ~PDW

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