Great poem, it's blunt but deep, odd but somehow seems like it's a state that familiar? Perhaps in out dreams it is possible to...nah, I'm just thinking and typing, that's my problem...haha. Wonderful poem, absoluting captivating. You seem like a sensible person yourself, and like maybe a great reviewer, someone who has some idea (even if it's just in your head) what the Hell you're talking about. So, would it be a burden to you to read what I have of my partner stories? They are just a tad long but if you really are as patient as you say you are, and maybe into tragedy, I think you may like them, they're not the versions that I prefer, the one's I have are in the middle of being...editted, though they aren't done yet, it's a little thing you know? I'm a little obsessive over how perfect all of it has to be...haha, the ones I have psted are a mess! I mean it, a MESS! So yes, if you do choose to read and review I would greatly appreciate it and anything you wish for me to read and review I would gladly comply *bows*, I shall be at your beck and call for any reviews you wish for, long or short, anything really, I'm always up for a good, long (I'm sorry if you hate rants, I'm good at those) wonderful review.

Long Days and Pleasant Nights (I'm a rabid Dark Tower fan), Gaki Toki

wow, good questions...great poem!!

Wow. I am without words...and that is rare. Great poem!

now this is my kind of poetry!! dark and deep, but not so much as to be scary.