Wow, this was great! I really like how you broke it up. Kinda reminds me of a poem I wrote called Yonder Is The Devil. I don't remember which account I have it in...it's either this one or smackalicious. Oh, well. Read it if you want. I'm not pressuring you. lol. Nice work, though!

Wow! What a well written poem. I completely enjoyed this. Write on!

~Anna~